EnchantressMuffin

Ooh... this was really really good. I don't think that any of the points you were unsure of were bad points. I very much liked the fact that this was ...

Mm... not a bad job on this, though your editing was pretty shoddy. Look it over as soon as you get a chance. No one really wants to read a ...

I'm giving my vote to Fred, the perverse chatbot. I actually have a confession to make... I have never really noticed Bartemius. I'm sorry, Bart!

Have to make this quick, so I'll just point out the grammar mistakes. “Not if your (should be you're) asking as her ex-boyfriend!” said Liz. Ally looked at him, a ...

Mm... so I said I'd comment, and here I am, commenting. First off, I liked this. I like your characters--ah, that endearing mix of quirkiness and realness--and your storyline and ...

Overall, this struck me as one of those, "Oh poor me, I've been broken up with, what do I do" kind of stories. Now, this kind of story can be ...

Mm... this was pretty good. I liked the storyline and whatnot pretty well, and the characters are likeable. But... - Through the whole thing, I had only a vague notion ...

Have you ever exploded a potato?

Certainly, I'll help you. What may I assist with? Do you need to learn how to climb a tree? Learn how to make a really big cookie? Find out how ...

Hi hi! Welcome welcome welcome! (welcome welcome) I'm Muffin, and you, of course, are a human being. Unless... are you an okapi in disguise? :shock: Amazing! I've always wanted to ...

Well, I told you what I thought (mostly) over IM, but I'll repeat it here for the benefit of you. You lucky girl. Alrighty. The first two stanzas were okay, ...

Without the help of the title and your disclaimer, one wouldn't really know that you were talking about vampires. Overall, it was pretty good. I haven't read Twilight, so I ...

Hi hi hi hi hi!! I'm Muffin, and I am very hyper and hungry right now, which is why I put all those "hi"s. Um.... I can't think of much ...

Hey Polkadots and Kyte! What rockin' names you both have! And icons as well! Woot, first impressions are great! Muffin P.S. Lindsay and Mesh, I too was informed of this ...

So... you're a big deal, are you? Heh, just kidding. :P Anyways, welcome to the International House of Werewolves, Vampires, Scary No-name Monsters, and Pirates. Oh, and me. Look forward ...