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Re: Heaven's Doorway, Pilgrims & A Parasol
These are fantastically beautiful; I love the way the light streams from the sky and sprays all over everything... it's like the photograph has been touched with a golden finger. ...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Character drawings...
Whoa, that first picture was skinny. I like the drawing of the girl, her sweater was very pretty and her skirt was nice. Pleats, woot. Muffin
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Gal's avatars
I love the first one! :D Calvin is a favorite. And also like the Elphaba one. I like that play a lot. :D Peace, love, chocolate. Muffin
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: The Writer
I've seen a lot of photos like that, incidentally, but that doesn't make them any less pretty. I do like how it's in black and white. It's gorgeous. Peace, love, ...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Accept Me
I like this. The idea may be elderly, but it was still a really nice poem, very cute. Just the first line made me think, "Oh, this could be really ...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Darkness in Love
I really like this. The rhymes are excellent, the subject matter is clever and intriguing, and I just basically love it. Great, fantastic job. :) Peace, love, chocolate. Muffin
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: The No Name Poem
I didn't like this. The whole thing seemed amateurish and nonsensical, and many parts of it didn't make much sense at all. Take the first stanza. "There is no man! ...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Halo 3
This was really... weird. Weird and unsatisfying. Now, writing about a video game can be a bad or good thing. It's not the sort of thing that you see every ...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: There are monsters under my bed
This was fairly good... I liked the line, "they have bloodstained teeth", as the imagery is very good there. The rest of it, aside from that line, was... mediocre. Agreeing ...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Prologue
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Muffin, but you can call me EM if you like. I don't much care. So. What kind of music do you like? What's a movie ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: First Person Poems
Oh, now I understand your poem about the flea better.
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Ways to display poetry
That sounds complex. Would you do the writing before or after the folding? Or would you fold, unfold, write, and refold?
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: The Lindsay
I like this! It's all part of the great enigma that is Lindsay. Awesome! It didn't strike me as particularly poemish, but then, what do I know? Peace, love, chocolate, ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Evil Mage! Mwahahahahaha!
Aw, man! I can't see this one either! Is there something wrong with my computer?? :cry:
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Sketch of Legolas
Aw... I can't see it. :(
Sep 24, 2007
