EnchantressMuffin

I'd critique it, but I can't find anything wrong with it, other than a couple of missing commas. Is it too late to do it, anyway? Muffin

This was pretty... uh... well... it wasn't that great. There was a lot of angsty romanciness, no character development (in this kind of setting, it's the only thing that will ...

There are no authors that I really hate, and it seems quite stupid to have a "personal vendetta" against an author if you don't personally know them. Sure, there are ...

I don't tell a lot of people that I write - at least, I try not to, but my parents love to thwart my plans - but I pretty much ...

This is neat. I like it, and the details are good, almost professional. Finn's hair is a little stiff and unnatural-looking; too square, you know? But I liked it anyway. ...

I've read that book. I love it! I always promise myself when I come up towards the ending I won't cry, and yet I always do, dangit! Peace, love, chocolate, ...

Yeah, I'm that way. I can't figure out all that stuff. I have to have things explained to me over and over and over... XD Peace, love, chocolate. Muffin

Heya, and welcome! I hope you like it here. If you'd like a critique or anything, just toss a PM my way and I'll do my best. Oh, by the ...

Welcome back, Author W! High school is fun, though! I'm a freshman as well, so I understand the homework situation... :P Except I finish most, if not all, of it ...

This was good. She obviously meant a lot to you, and your friend as well. I'm really sorry that she died; it's always a tragedy. I hope your friend feels ...

I liked this! I wasn't sure about it from the first stanza, but it really captured me about halfway through the second. It was very lyrical, and the flow was ...

I like the Halloween dude. He's pretty cute, in a skeletal, I'll-kill-you-in-your-sleep kind of way. Peace, love, chocolate. Muffin

Hey Ren, Aiva, and ebonylynn! Welcome to YWS! PM me if you have any questions or would like a critique. I'm happy to lend a typing finger. :) Peace, love, ...

This was good - really interesting. I liked it. It didn't really seem like much of a poem to me, maybe because it had stanzas like paragraphs. I don't know... ...

I read your piece, "Ode To Burnt Toast", and I liked it so much that I figured that all your poetry much be awesome. So, when I saw this, I ...