EnchantressMuffin

Well... this was interesting. I rather liked it. Parts of it were funny, which was good, and it was extremely nonsensical, which I also liked. I liked the ending; it ...

Contrary to Incandescence's viewpoint, I liked this. It's a good concept, and some of the lines were really nifty. I especially liked the first staza, and this line: "Here is ...

That's... it? Nothing else to say? :( Fine, then. What kind of things do you like to read? Ooh! Do you like horses? Peace, love, chocolate, Muffin

Hello, guy! Welcome to YWS, and I hope you like it here. Now, let me pick your brain: How did you find out about the site? What's a TV show ...

Welcome... uh... back? Yes, welcome back. Hi. And... it's a little early to be wishing people happy Thanksgiving when it's not even gone past Halloween. :D Peace, love, chocolate, Muffin

I love the second one; so fabulously cute! The third's fantastic as well. I love the reflections. The first one I don't like so much. Sunglasses on cats was never ...

This updated version is a lot better, but I think something needs to be pointed out. Technically, if there was a bus on the rampage, the cops would not go ...

Whoa. Yes, that was my first reponse. Whoa. This was not, shall we say, how I was expecting this to end. Mind you, that's a very good thing. But I ...

This was pretty hard to understand. The beginning was okay, but then it went all weird and difficult. I'll do a point-by-point: 1. Why was Samantha gasping in relief? She ...

Well, I said I'd critique, and here I am. First off, I liked how you started the story with a newspaper article. I do think that the article, in and ...

:shock: Is that Google on top of the pile?

I like the wads of hair on the last. The other two don't really stick in my memory, which is probably not a good thing... *goes to check* Well, I ...

Since everyone seems to be posting and telling how much they liked it: I didn't. Muffin

These were really great! I think I liked the fifth the best; the clouds were incredibly beautiful and powerful-looking. The birds were a good capture, as well. 1. The focus ...

Hiya there, Jared! I'm Muffin (or EM, if you don't want to type six letters), and I really hope you'll continue liking it here. If you have any questions, comments, ...