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Re: The Lovely Bones
I never read this, but my mom did, and she said she didn't like it, and I shouldn't read it. I read the book jacket, though, and while I didn't ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Falling From Grace
Sounds like a good book! Not necessarily my type of thing, but still. Good. Next time I can get my mom to take me to the bookstore I'll see if ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: confessions of a dreamer
Hi! You've convinced me; I shall call you Sage. Actually, that's a cool name. Herbish. And, learning to drive! Sounds like death-defying fun! (I know.. my sister and my friend ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Little fact-file thingymajig
Millions of times? Wow... you must see each other a bunch. Does blinking count as a breakup period? And, hi... I like your intro. Tis a cool little thing. Peace, ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: About me
I can't promise that I'll join, but I'll check it out, certainly. :) Peace, love, chocolate, Muffin
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Werewolves
I liked this. It was cute and quick and nice, and as I like werewolves, the title drew me in right away. I did notice that in your first stanza ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: keep me safe.
Technically, Lini, he did use some punctuation, but still, your point is well made. :) And, this was not a bad first draft. It was a little bit angsty and ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Howdy!!!!!
Hi, PrincessLeia23! Welcome to YWS. I'm Muffin (gee, go figure :)) and I'm always up for critiquing - plus I'm on here every day - so if you'd like me ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: hiya
*echoes previous posters* Pretty much everybody else said what I could say (grr), but I figured I'd pop in and say hi anyway. Hi. :D Peace, love, chocolate, Muffin
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: i so hate consequences
Yay, another freshman! Welcome to YWS; I'm Muffin, one of the chat-lurkers. Feel free to toss me a little PM magic if you fancy a conversation. :P Also, if you'd ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: I Have A 2mm. Hole In My Heart
Hi! Welcome to YWS! I'm Muffin, or EM, if you prefer. I'm a freshman too, yay. A lot of people on here are, come to think of it, but still, ...
Oct 13, 2007 -
Re: Line Breaks
I operate along the lines of "sounding right". Wherever I think a line should be, that's where I put it. Sort of like writing poetry; I just write down the ...
Oct 12, 2007 -
Re: My Trader Joes Tote Bag is Quite Heavy
Hi there! I'm Muffin, resident sycophant. I hope you like it here! If you have any questions, or would like a critique or something, don't hesitate to toss me a ...
Oct 11, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
*echoes Rick*
Oct 11, 2007 -
Re: Wow it's ME!
Wow, it's you! And yes, hello hello. I like your name. :D Not much else to say other than that... :P Peace, love, chocolate, Muffin
Oct 11, 2007
