Emorykings

Thats quit an interesting poem I love your use of words except for the unecessary repetion. Also this line "..you're so close, yet I can't touch your heart. I wish ...

This is how I think the poem should be maybe its just me. You and I, we're like a centipede We share our eyes, ears, hands and feet This makes ...

grammatical error are much in the poem and the poem does not have feeling in it its just a boring line of story it misses the feeling of a poem, ...

Am not much into grammatical error thing but mostly theme and I think the general theme of this poem of yours was intresting the whole holding back even when the ...

I enjoy reading the poem it was beautiful but it ended quickly than i anticipated

Its a nice poem I loved reading it as was stated ealier it sure needs comma and also there are some little stuff I saw that maybe you might want ...

I'm a man of little means But true love I will never miss It shines so bright in the sky And seems so far from a man like me But ...

I enjoyed reading through your poem but i do not see the essence of the repetion here "your soul with your body - your body with your soul." it looks ...

You did a great job with your poem. But the are some things you should consider. Firstly there were words that were unecessary and the lines didn't fit. And this ...

though the concept of mixed meaning is new to me i enjoyed your poem

your combination of science and history in d poem is wat thrilled me most. it is a beautiful concept

I enjoy reading through this poem of yours though it was rather short. But the thing i do not understand is your use of pebble in your first expression. Pebble ...

I love your poem it was beautiful, but i do see how, "I can't protect, resist, defend for the cyclone likes to rip out hearts." relates to the rest of ...

Hair beautifully black As a night at sea; Skin, pearl white, Like the froth of a majestic wave. Your walk so gallant And proud; Your stride so stunning, And your ...

you did a nice job there only that the poem was too lenght and that your title should have been dreams and nightmares