Emorykings

as babygirl12 rightly acknowledge its a great poem, that just needs little adjusting for it to be perfect. firstly i would emplore you to do some thing about your formatting, ...

wow thats cool you did a great stuff there, though i dont know if your formatting is accapted in poetry, I liked it. but i would like to add that ...

I see you really took time to work on this pieces, your constructive english, rhythm and imagery was cool. But what i think you really did not pay attention to ...

beautiful i must confess, i enjoyed most of the poem that there really isnt much to say. but i'd like to say that this stanza "Breezes of tempetous air Vised ...

iove your poem your use of words, the deep feelings i felt as i read through the poem it was classy. But am never really a fan of lenghty poem ...

hey it was lovely i enjoyed reading this poem your rythm of tamps and damp was inspiring. But I would love to know cause am not too sure of what ...

I want to say thanks to all of you for the review next time I will do better. And jessy what i meant by that last line "when you arrive, ...

hey dear dont be sorry to anyone its your poem and if you say its great its great. we are only here to say what we think about it. and ...

if I say I did not enjoy this poem I will only be lying to myself it was beautiful and something I think every members of YWS can relate seeing ...

seriously I can say I enjoyed it as a poem, the title in the first place is not attractive and am not sure potrays the whole theme of the poem. ...

Love, Your name I hear, Everywhere I turn. Who you really are, I know not Just some whispers Muttered in utter silence. Its said you come to everyone, When will ...

maybe its just me but I think this is the same poem I have seen some around this category with a different title

I love your poem, I really do, but there is something I will like to point out. When writing a poem it should either be past or present, but what ...

I think it was great what you did with you poem I enjoyed reading it. whatn i wasnt sure about was the title you call it "thinprettysmartstrong---lost" but in your ...

apart from the critique made above i think your poem is good it has deep feeling and i kind of understand the feeling in the poem its very common among ...