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Re: If I Must Die
I love poems that rhyme, and this one has perfect imagery too... I really liked it :) xxx
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Re: Hope
I love this :) It's very... dark With a happy ending. SO my style :) xxx
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Re: Life
Short and totally sweet :) Keep writing poetry. I loved this! It's cute xx
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Re: You wonder what happens after you die
This poem really spoke out to me as this is something I've been really fretting about for ages.... and I guess that it's awesome that you think about this stuff ...
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Re: Blind
This is so intriguing! You've got an awesome imagination. I love all of the words you chose, it all fits together perfectly and it seems to describe me pretty well ...
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Re: Tired of not being me (Monolouge)
I wanted to comment on this 'cos it's awesome, and 'cos you said nice things about my poem ! :) I loved the emotion in this; the use of exclamation ...
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Re: Oh and here is your knife back
You've told a story through descriptive poetry and i love it... :) xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Snow Flakes
Yes! The description is just.... perfect :) So I like your poem! Don't give up :) Rhyming isn't so hard xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: The Kill
These lyrics are awesome! Definately my type of music. I can imagine singing along to this ;) Well done ! xxx
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Re: Dead Magic.
Beautiful :) You really put images in my head. Keep on writing poetry xx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Devil
I love this. Like, everybody hides behind a mask? That;s the sense that I get out of this, anyway. I love it :) xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Schizophrenia
Wow. I love this. Real heartfelt stuff :) xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Hey, PLEASE review my stuff :) Especially my first story on here, Together Again Part One (I need to get more points to post Part Two...); I want to know ...
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Re: The Golden Gate Bridge
Wow! That is just so awesome and INSIRATIONAL! You've left alot to the imaginatio and I love that. I love the flow of the whole thing. xxx
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Re: Just another broken heart in the sand
Beautiful imigary :) xxx
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