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Emmzziee

  • Lyrics Re: I Should've Been a Star

    This is great! :D And I know what this kind of thing feels like... like, you constantly feel useless; because you aren't famous, so nobody can ever be proud of ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Name finding tips

    I like Alex :) Because not only does it sound very tom-boyish when it's in short-form, but Alexandra sounds naive and innocent, in my opinion, and gives a whole different ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Dog and Me

    This is cute :) The end part kind of reminds me of that advert, "My cat loves whiskers, and I love my cat!" And it's all put together really nicely, ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Miss You

    The day you died; When you left me behind. Without a note... Not a kiss, No goodbye... When you committed suicide. I write this to you, my forever broken angel. ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Take a Moment. Look at Your Story...

    Wow! I can't believe I actually read all of that, and I just kept thinking... "Yes! So right...!" Inspired :D xxx

    Dec 23, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An Unfortunate Sneeze

    Nice title ;) That was really cute! And fun too read. It's great, when I can read stories as easily as this one and still get entertained. Considering it wasn't ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: DELETED.

    moo.

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Cold

    This is great :) And it's all true and appropriate, too. You don't go into great emotional detail about other "cold" things, whcih makes poems hard to read... You stuck ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Baby Doll

    Wow! This is amazingly spooky... Full of mystery. I don't 100% fully understand what the poem's supposed to be about, and yet it still feels kind of perfect. It's my ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Snow.

    I like this! I love snow, too... and I love poems that rhyme, and poems that use simple words like "lies" and make them sound beautiful, somehow... Your poem does ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Emily is Lost

    This is easy to read, and I'm sure that it can relate to a lot of people too :) Lots of people have lost their best friends. Maybe... just maybe, ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Trapped

    This is a really good poem! And it kind of related to me in a way... Well, I'm sure that it could relate to EVERYBODY; everyone feels trapped sometimes; as ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: You're Perfect

    That was ... really good :) And kind of chilling too... I love poems that are written like this. And a total bonus is that I understood it, no doubt ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Snowflakes

    I saw the title and I was thinking, "I hope this isn't a cliche poem..." And it's not at ALL! It's beautiful, and original :) xx

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Random christmas story :)

    This is cute! :D and... you've totally inspired me to write something like this.. ;) xxxx

    Dec 22, 2010


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