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Re: I Should've Been a Star
This is great! :D And I know what this kind of thing feels like... like, you constantly feel useless; because you aren't famous, so nobody can ever be proud of ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Name finding tips
I like Alex :) Because not only does it sound very tom-boyish when it's in short-form, but Alexandra sounds naive and innocent, in my opinion, and gives a whole different ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: My Dog and Me
This is cute :) The end part kind of reminds me of that advert, "My cat loves whiskers, and I love my cat!" And it's all put together really nicely, ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: I Miss You
The day you died; When you left me behind. Without a note... Not a kiss, No goodbye... When you committed suicide. I write this to you, my forever broken angel. ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Take a Moment. Look at Your Story...
Wow! I can't believe I actually read all of that, and I just kept thinking... "Yes! So right...!" Inspired :D xxx
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: An Unfortunate Sneeze
Nice title ;) That was really cute! And fun too read. It's great, when I can read stories as easily as this one and still get entertained. Considering it wasn't ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: DELETED.
moo.
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: The Cold
This is great :) And it's all true and appropriate, too. You don't go into great emotional detail about other "cold" things, whcih makes poems hard to read... You stuck ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Baby Doll
Wow! This is amazingly spooky... Full of mystery. I don't 100% fully understand what the poem's supposed to be about, and yet it still feels kind of perfect. It's my ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: The Snow.
I like this! I love snow, too... and I love poems that rhyme, and poems that use simple words like "lies" and make them sound beautiful, somehow... Your poem does ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Emily is Lost
This is easy to read, and I'm sure that it can relate to a lot of people too :) Lots of people have lost their best friends. Maybe... just maybe, ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
This is a really good poem! And it kind of related to me in a way... Well, I'm sure that it could relate to EVERYBODY; everyone feels trapped sometimes; as ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: You're Perfect
That was ... really good :) And kind of chilling too... I love poems that are written like this. And a total bonus is that I understood it, no doubt ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Snowflakes
I saw the title and I was thinking, "I hope this isn't a cliche poem..." And it's not at ALL! It's beautiful, and original :) xx
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Random christmas story :)
This is cute! :D and... you've totally inspired me to write something like this.. ;) xxxx
Dec 22, 2010
