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There's a song that I know called "For a Pessimist I'm pretty optimisic" and that's what drew me to your poem. And I think you're REALLY wrong, by the way! ...

Ooh, can I play?! :) Fortunately, the black hole was really a portal that sucks plantets into other similar universes; So the dimention gets sucked in totally unharmed... err.. I ...

Yes, yes :) If life gives you lemons, make lemonade. If life gives you diabetes, don't make lemonade. ;) xx

Ooh yes! :) Can you review this, please? Tah, if you do :D xxx

You mean, in my YWS inbox? :)

This shows really, really good potential :D Like, you really put a picture in my head of this lost, helpless, broken girl... it's all really well worded and the descriptions ...

Aww, cute :) She has beautiful eyes, and you're very good with a camera! :D The black and white one is real nice. xx

Aww, cute :) She has beautiful eyes, and you're very good with a camera! :D The black and white one is real nice. xx

HA. :) This is good! :D It sounds like you got your inspiration back... 'cos I like this :) It made me smile. and I don't know why... :P x

This is good :D I really like this; it's so emotional... I can't really think of anything to say; as far as I can see, there's nothing to critisise either ...

This is a really good, touching, descriptive poem! :) *wipes away tear* It kind of reminds me of an Evanescence song... if you know who they are) :D Because of ...

Whebn I submitted my poem, it gave me a code and said I could "track it down" or something... Is that to see if it will be published or something? ...

This is... cute ;) I love the end part; totally unexpected. There's just this one part; "might I steal a crate?" That kind of sounded a little predictable; like you ...

"A brilliant orb of diamond fire." That was my favorite description. This whole poem is brilliantly descriptive and thought-through, and well-presented. I really, really like this! :D yay! xxx

“It’s happening!” she squealed gripping his arm. But it wasn’t there. “Jarred! Jarred where did you go?” On just this one part... is it supposed to say, "But he wasn't ...