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Re: Light and dark.
I can't really think of anything to say on this; it's short, okay, but it's just fantastic :D The title of your poem really drew me to this; I was ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but it's really horrible, watery, no-sugar-and-no-milk tea :shock: # I wish that I was a famous author :D
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Insomnia
I made a poem called insomnia :D But can I just say that mine was like a nursery-school version compared to yours?! How do you manange to piece together such ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: What if...
I'd, err... ask them why MY mother wasn't a selfless vigin. :smt003 And then I'd be happy with knowing Jesus' last name; knowing that I'm related to Him and being ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Daddy?
This is chilling :D I just love it... It paints a picture, and still leaves so MUCH to the imagination because you don't give anything away. I love the way ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: You're Gone
I like this :) And I think you're right with it being something Avril Lavigne might write; however, this was a bit more emotional for her style of music, which ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: diary of a depressed Egyptian girl introduction to the story
Non-fiction means that your story is true... Is your story real? Because if it is, then I really like it; it's dramatic; it's sad... And I really feel for you ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Megan will review!
Ooh! :) Please review my little poem: Thank you! :D
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: What I am
This was really fun to read! :D The only problem was, I found it hard to grasp what the message was... What the poem was about... But the way that ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: One thing
I wish that I was as articulate as you are! This piece of descriptive writing is amazing. All of that emotional stuff about unanswered questions? The way you wrote it ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: What She Really Is
One nose, one mouth, and two eyes to see: that she was everything that a girl should be; Her hair was flowing way past her waist, her arms and legs ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Take Me Away
Your title is the same as that of an Avril Lavigne song, and that's what drew me to this :) I was all set to shout at you for pretending ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Submit to the Young Writers Literary Journal! (closed)
Okay, sorry I keep posting on this... But I never wrote my address here in YWS, so there'd be no way of them contacting me... :)
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Novels That Helped You Write Better
When I was eight, I never ever read stories or anything. I couldn't really read that well, although I always wanted too. And then my Dad took me to the ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Yay! :D Okay, so fortunately, the aliens had never encountered human beings before, and therefore had never built up any bacteria-fighting defenses in their useless bodies, so... the head-alien died ...
Jan 3, 2011
