Emmzziee

Wow, this was an amazing poem and I love things like this. About mystical, mysterious people... I loved reading this. I loved the flow. The title is real' nice and ...

I enjoyed reading this immensly :D Good collection of imagery. And I mean, really good :) I found it hard to grasp the meaning of this poem, but with me, ...

This is good, and I'm sure your teacher will think this is awesome :D But... to me, I can't REALLY feel anything... I just see a jumble of adjectives. It's ...

Ooh cool :D it'd be just awesome if you could review my lil' poem for me :) Xxx

A total stranger. If it was somebody I knew, I know I'd have to learn to hate the two people that I used to love. Unless... I didn't know the ...

Ooooh, it'd be awesome if you could review my poem :D Xxx

OH! ME ME ME :D Please review my poem :) You don't have too... But it'd be just awesome if you would ;) Xxx

Ha! The end part is awesome :D And this poem... it made me feel sick. Is that the effect you were going for? :) And the way you'd described everything ...

This is a really inventive little thing! :D When I read this, I could feel, what was going on, too... This whole descriptive little emotional piece of writing was truly ...

Don't let me feel. Anything. Anymore. For these worthless words with their powerful core. They eat away at my soul and scream; whisper; mutter; die... But what do they mean? ...

This is good! :D I really liked reading this. It's nice to read, descriptive, infromative... :) There are tons of spelling mistakes though: drakness - darkness phantomes - phantoms lisntening ...

This is good! :) You definately DO NOT lack description and descriptive words :D I espeially liked the first part, where you are describing the boarding school. I could almost ...

This is... good :) Yes. Simple, but good. I mean, it's a really good idea; really imaginative, good thinking, with thinking of "being cheated on" as a place; a bad ...

"Jess... Ghosts. Ghosts are gaining on us. I feel like that... There is a word to... to describe..." She sighed wearlily and swept her matted fringe back. "Sorry, Jess... I ...

Banned for being rude! :D