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'Know what this reminds me of? The Blood Brothers. We're currently studying it in my drama class and... this sure does remind me of that. I hear my mommy and ...

No, yes, I agree; after re-reading my poem I realise that it's actually pretty rubbish :D However... it actually won't let me delete it? :O

This is very straightforward; but sometimes, it's good to have a straightforward poem fluttering around. All of these complicated ones get all samey and boring xD! This one speaks straight ...

Your poem is very mature and you've retold your difficulties in a totally unique way. I reaaally like this; I only wish that I could write this good :D Yes, ...

Pleaseeee?! :D I'll swap you - I'll review something of yours if you like :D

I like this :D So long as you have an awesome tune to go with it! If this were an ordinary poem, I'd say to crop up the ends a ...

I waaay prefer writing in the past-tense because I've always done it :) It's easy to start off a story in present, but I get confused and I forget. :D ...

She sings as you fall And as your limbs sprawl Don't look at those angels, Whom sing with the tide; or you're lucky to live When the oceans have died. ...

D'ya know... I guess that all of my poems are pretty much "emo." And that makes me frown. :? I really don't understand the difference :O Maybe some poems should ...

Hey, wow :D This is really good! I love the style, the structure, and the subject (yes... please, don't ask) :D All'st I would suggest is making it a bit ...

The title is so pretty :) And the poem is, too! All I'd suggest is working on that structure. It's not really very... poem'y at the moment. :) But the ...

No, I really liked this too! (I guess your poem's just like Marmite) :) Sometimes it's good for a poem to not have a particular story-line - or any meaning ...

Wow :D How long did it take you to draw these?! They're fantastic :D

Unfortunately, the humans were all severely schizophrenic - they shot anything that moved...

You're a real' good writer! :D There's a lot of imagery here - and I think that the descriptions you've used are exactly my kind of thing. Just perfect. Perfect ...