EmmaJane

She is... by Between The Trees has has finished. Comatose by Skillet is just starting. they are both AMAZING :D

The original Prologue was something like 4, 5 A4 pages and I hadn't even finished. So I thought I'd better cut it down. :D And yeah, ^^' I often get ...

****Okay. This is a suckage prologue and I am totally not using this at all. Sorry. I have a different, more gripping prologue. Please check that one out instead.**** The ...

Wow. That's really put me to shame :D

Well, I guess I'm out of a job. :D This was great. I couldn't pick out a single error, only nit-picks. I didn’t want to give him the satisfaction of ...

This sounds cool! Name: can it be made up? If it can then: Erome (pronounced eee-rome) Age: 19 Gender: Female What you are: hunter Special Gift: Controls the weather. Appearance: ...

Okay, it's really painful being left on such a cliffhanger. Please say you'll post the next chapter soon. :D

Due to Chapter One being too short I have decided that Chapter Two is now part of Chapter One. Sorry if it might take me a while to edit the ...

Hey :D This caught my eye :) The night was perfect for an evening stroll, but yet, the area was deserted, blank as sheet of paper. You don't need the ...

Welcome to YWS b the way!! :D

Okay. Paragraphing is definitely the issue here, but has been covered by red_roses :D Tense. Is this in future or past? Pick one and stick with it. I glanced up ...

Hey :) I also have a problem with the "she had won" it casts her in totally the wrong light, making her look scheming and evil. And more description needed. ...

I'm actually quite scared I missed those :S lol, the number of times I've read through it checking for mistakes! But yeah, thank you!!! ^^ :D

Don't say that you'll make me cry! And i have had tears in my eyes more than twice when thinking of the sad moments that are gonna happen. *getting too ...

* * * “Lady Amelia?” I jerked my head up from my folded arms. I hadn’t been asleep, but I’d been near it; lost in the twilight region of my ...