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Re: The Asylum
Heron "This ... is all ... too much," she gasped, fighting to catch her breath. "Too ... much." No one said anything. It was too true. Heron swallowed and looked ...
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Re: Instinct
Sophia ~ Panther Annoyed did not cover it. Snarling and growling, it was all she could do to hold herself back. If she attacked the cage she'd only hurt herself. ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Mr. Solomius' Tasks
ha ha. Soria Oh no, this can't be happening. She couldn't tell any of these people. At least, not yet. Not with Nabin's hand so warm and comforting on her ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Willow-Chapter 1
Hi there, Tyler. EmmaJane here as requested. :wink: First of all, I can see this is a little too long and daunting. It would be easier and less daunting to ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Instinct
Ha ha! That was hilarious, Buggy! Sophia ~ Panther She drew her lips back and snarled. Her long, white teeth - which she'd love to sink into the hyena - ...
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Re: Outcasts
Gah! I was certain I replied... O.o Sandy "You're hurt?" she said to Zach, briefly wondering why she hadn't picked up on it. Maybe her sluggish thoughts and lethargy had ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: The Asylum
**Erome knows how to bring the Asylum down. Quite simple, actually. ^^ And what characters are in this? Sorry, but I hate carrying deadwood. :( I think I've got the ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: The Lost City
Marneus "Marnie, it's raining," said a voice. He stood on the balcony, one hand griping the stone banister, the other dangling by his side. Water droplets dripped from his fingers. ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Instinct
Name: Sophia Age: 17 Gender: Female Animal: Solitary and stealthy, often called "the ghost of the forest". Strongest tree-climbers of the cat family. Temperamental. Appearance: Except her eyes are bri
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Into the Depths Chapter 1
Hello! Sorry I'm so late! :oops: It kinda slipped my mind... Anyways, you wanted me to pick out American words and find the English version? A few may have sipped ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: First chapter of book :)
Hey there, Sophia. Welcome to YWS, A.K.A. the mad house. ^^ I can see you've got a great story going on here so I shall review it! :smt023 Nitpicks: “Master,” ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Instinct
Saves spot for a panther. A kinda person.
Sep 4, 2009 -
Re: The Asylum
*gasps!* she could become sane again (sometime in the distant future) and help them destroy the Asylum! O.o maybe...
Sep 4, 2009 -
Re: The Muses
I'm unsure who's got who. Perhaps you could mark off the ones accounted for, or put the open spaces in bold or something. :S
Sep 4, 2009 -
Re: The Lost City
Do we start soon? Ha ha, sorry, but I can't wait for it to start. :D
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