EmmaJane

Hello there Heffa! This was once again very good. I just notice a couple of typos, that's all. “Just a bad nightmare.” You forgot the "a". I can tell something ...

Cynara! You're back in the game! Excellent! I do love your work. :smt003 Thanks so much for the PM or I would have missed this! Well, on with the review! ...

O.o Just to let you know, I'm still in the game and will post later. :D

Wow. This is so much better than the first chapter. ...Not that the first chapter was bad or anything... I think it may be because you don't have the info ...

WHO IS THE NERDY GUY?? :smt003 Yeah ... I just thought I'd glance over this again. But the mystery is killing me! ...Are you continuing with this...? Please do! It's ...

Irish! Promised I'd get around to it, didn't I? :wink: Yeah, it looks a little long, but hopefully it'll be so good that actually it's too short. :P So... :smt023 ...

Hey. I'm considering continuing this. Should I? O.o Or should I leave it as it is? Please say. :D My love, ~Emma

I'm doing these very slowly. :smt003 Possibly in the vain hope that when I reach the third chapter there'll be more up. ^^ So, yes, the review: I didn't pick ...

WhiteT - Zeus is still with Calliope, but you could run into Hera. :smt003 Errrmm. Is it okay? Did I get Aphrodite right? Hera "Aphrodite." Hera stopped and glared at ...

Ooops. Apollo With a small smile, he reached out and stilled her swinging arm. The feathers of the hawk soft against his fingers. "How about I take you to see ...

Hera "How dare you!" she hissed, glaring at Calliope. "How dare you!" She slipped off her seat and stalked towards the startled girl. "You and your sisters part of the ...

KJ! How are you? ^^ I got mixed up. I'm reviewing this, not the other stuff. Sorry! :D But I can do others too if you want... Anyways. :smt023 Nitpicks! ...

Don't die!!!!!! Erome Her eyes never left Peter's face. He would die. He had to die. If he were to- "What are you looking at?" he spat. "Peter," she rasped. ...

Oooooh! Oops. *blushes*

Ah, right, okay. Awesomeness. ^^ Marnie Clotho was holding onto his arm. Clotho. Perhaps the most interesting and trusting of all the faeries, and she was holding onto his arm. ...