EmmaJane

So... who compiled the list? :D

Okay. Wow. *blinks* That's just ... amazing . There will be no words to describe the finished copy. ^^ The shading and effects are both beautiful. I love how you've ...

"How much do you need to buy?," I asked him Noo! remove the comma - you don't need it 'cause you're asking a question. Don't use the comma if you ...

Hellooo! I see no more chapters are up. :( Damn, I'll review anyways. :smt003 :smt023 English/American words (or spelling mistakes O.o): it had a delectable odor . Odour. I'll help ...

Oops, sorry. Spotted some wrong advice which I'd given you. Inside the school was impossibly full, every corner people greeting each other, girls squealing in excitement, footballs flying on the ...

pudin.junidf: just out of curiosity, what came first on the list? Edit: "The Notebook" made me cry. :smt001 I was actually on the verge of sobbing. :wink: *sighs* Wonderful film. ...

Only just found this thread... :D Libba Bray is amazing in so many ways. I can't be bothered at the moment to list them all. ^^ But you guys already ...

Hello again! Here's the next part of my review! :smt003 I leaned down to whisper in the fox’s ear “Lets go Sasa,” she shot forward I missed this in my ...

Sorry. Uh, this might be too... Sorry. I just get very passionate about Feminism. Sorry. Don't be sorry! It's a good thing! ^^ We need more people like you and ...

"Seriously, I can't tell what emotion you're going for, 'cause you always just look nauseous." I love that line! That made me crack up so badly! It's probably because she ...

I read it! YEARS ago. I tried to read it again, but couldn't get past the first page. ...The millions of exclamation marks just killed, and it's such a gary-stue ...

B: (open-mouthed) He stole your gun, aren't you going to do something? C: (laughing) Do something? Like what? (mock-points his gun at EDWARD, who mock-panics) Freeze! You stole my gun! ...

Oh, how creepy! Your thoughts return to the warmth of the blanket , remembering that you have already turned off your electric blanket . This just stood out to me. ...

Oh, whoa. The end was ... creepy? I'm unsure how to describe my feeling of unease after that. O.o Much better than the first. I loved your opening line, and ...

Hello cogito! I'm here to review your piece, obviously. ^^ :smt023 Nitpicks: It was 11: 05 when he called me that day. Great start here. The only thing I would ...