EmmaJane

KJ, you can't ask me to review this! It's too perfect. :P If I did manage to find some tiny mistake, I'm sure it would be too minuscule to worry ...

Why should you feel awkward? Everyone makes mistakes. And no, not too much work needed. I got a good sense of what was happening, and who was who. Despite knowing ...

Hi! :smt003 I've seen Fruits Basket! A couple of years ago... It was (and still is) one of my favourite animes! So it was pretty funny reading this and seeing ...

Hello! I'm back! Sorry about that. :) To cautiously walk towards his prey, then, when the man (hopefully) has his back to the crowd, Altair will strike with the silver ...

Hello iCarlyfan! Here as requested ;) How has your christmas been? Well, on with the review! :smt023 Nitpicks! Slowly, Altair approached his victim with ease. Good hook. I know nothing ...

Ha ha. I heard it was bad. Apparently it was too condescending, did you get a sense of that, too? I want to continue reading that series, but the negative ...

Irishhh! :D It's been a while, a long while, but here are my thoughts on the next section. :smt023 Nitpicks! We walked into the King’s chamber silently, looking down at ...

Oh, poor Oliver! Arya, I sorta twisted your post. :( Hope you don't mind. Heron They ran through the field, which was horribly muddy from the torrential rain it had ...

Hope you guys don't mind me bringing it back from the dead. I just kind of forgot to post ... sorry... Oh, yeah, it's pretty bad, but I'm also pretty ...

Cynara! I'm here to review your long-anticipated story here. :wink: :smt023 Prologue: Nitpicks: Stop laughing, it was nor funny. "Not"? It was just a little snake, no big of a ...

Note: This is something I had to do for my English Lit. It had to be a short story of 750 words, so it got quite hard towards the end. ...

Sorry, it's been a while. ^^' I do intend to review all of this story, by the way. Especially after this chapter. :smt003 :smt023 Nitpicks: Sorry to repeat wheat the ...

Okay, just a very quick note to say how you've put the dialogue in bold. Don't. (: How many stories have you seen where the dialogue is in bold? Erm... ...

During Roran's time in Carvahall: "Those women who had been recently widowed, like Nolla..." And later... " "You can have the pleasure of waking up Nolla." (said Roran) (name) smiled ...

Hey there, michaelahart! Welcome to YWS, hope you really enjoy it here. It's ever so wonderful. :wink: If it's any consolation, I'm hardly 14? Nope. No consolation. I've seen people ...