EmmaJane

BenFranks! Thank you for your lovely comment! ^^ Fantasy fiction is amazing. ;) You should definitely read more. C: Drago101! Aw, thank you too! The village will be briefly explained ...

Deleted

Ha! No, Bryony, no more fish just yet. :D But soon. C: Lauren - ah, yeah... It's not too realistic, huh? ): But I've changed the next chapter a little, ...

Oh. My. Gosh. O.O Thank you all for your comments! It was a wonderful surprise! Brii , Wolfdaemon , Durriedog , Legendaryrose , and giantslenate09 - Aw thanks so much, ...

Hi there, Nike! Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll have a great time on this site, it's a fantastic place to sharpen your writing skills, with many wonderful, funny people ...

Hi Pink! Nice story! I just read it and noticed a few tiny things... “I think you’re stupid,” Laelia stated. Great opening line. That instantly made me curious. C: they ...

So I have been given advice to focus a little more on Amelia. So I have. C: She's in for a bit of "a nasty surprise". To those who reviewed ...

Hey wonderingkate! This was a nice, short and sweet piece. I just noticed a few small things. the pounding heart that lies in my chest I feel you sort of ...

This fell flat on its face...

Oh my gosh, Skittles! I love your user name and picture! They're both so amazing! ^^ Ahem ... yes, onto the review... I love this idea, and I can see ...

Thank you for reviewing, guys! :smt003 I was thinking I left this too long to start posting again... Miriam - Thank you for the extensive review! As usual - I ...

Um... It's been a while, I know. Sorry... I spent a while on other ideas and neglected this one. But! Here is chapter eight! It's been quietly gathering dust somewhere ...

Thank you Bluepetra and Kinla! I've edited it now, everyone. Please tell me what you think! I mean, can you tell I've just added that part on? Does it differ ...

carelessaussie13 - Thank you. ^^ As for the jagged line, do you mean what the children are saying or the description following it? Meadow - Thank you also! I know, ...

As for what's happened, I'm none too sure myself. Oliver's still captured. Ada went off with Mikael and Ephraim to change their appearance. I think they're still in the shop... ...