EmmaJane

Surely he's over Rosaline? ;) I thought the ending was done very, very well. I wasn't expecting the twist at all, as I figured you were just puppeting Shakespeare’s characters. ...

Thank you for bringing this up, because this really confuses me! I used to use the second rule, but I've been told that the "ed" version is better. Yet when ...

Hi! I saw your chapter ten ages ago, read a little bit through then realised it was actually amazing, so I went to the beginning. Blooming brilliant. I've loved every ...

Wow, magicwithin, that was great. But I spotted a problem or two: I've anticipated your arrival, fantasized over the precise point of our first embrace, forming various understated conclusions of ...

Where did you stop reading? I didn't. I read it all. Stopping was an unbearable thought. C: Even if you had posted loads of chapters I doubt I would have ...

Hey noheroes! Can I call you that for short? Welcome to YWS! This is a wonderful site, filled with people always eager to help and develop your writing skills. I'm ...

Hi! This is a short story I had to do for English. It had to relate to another creative piece of writing, so that's why this is quite descriptive and, ...

Could you make the picture smaller? I mean, it would just be easier, sorry to be a pain. I like this dress. C: I could see it in Debenhams, I ...

I was guilty of not capitalising my "i"s when I first joined. It didn't take me long to change that. C: Yep, YWS has turned me into a sharp-eyed, nit-picking ...

Hi Nativecatcher! I just read your unedited version before spotting this one, and I have to say, I preferred your simple "Thursday was when it first happened" to the new ...

Sorry it's taken me so long to thank you all - I've been out of the country for a while. Holiday. :D TreeHugger12 - Both Clara and the other children ...

KJ! You have something new here, I see. Well, I did enjoy it. Although I spotted: Yet another reason to mourn Father’s violet passing Violent? It always annoys me when ...

Okay, so the first idea was that Mr. Davis was the driver of the car. Then realised how stupidly unrealistic this was. Although, him being the passenger is also unrealistic, ...

10. Mr. Davis “I didn’t think his scars were that bad,” came the sound of Maya’s voice. “Personally, I thought they made him look yummier.” Just shut up , I ...

Hi Kate! Thanks for the PM, I wouldn't have caught this otherwise. C: And once again I did enjoy it. :D Anyways, on to the review! My foot inched downward ...