EmmaJane

Hi Sillyducky (I love your user name, by the way!). I'm here to review! C: My, my, your prologue was certainly gripping. It was done very well, especially the first ...

Chapter Six (p. 2) Voices sounded, snapping Kieran from his thoughts of vengeance. They grew louder as they got closer to him and Kieran tried to struggle into a sitting ...

Ha ha. Matching internal clocks? lol Okey doke, sorry for the confusion! About a year ago, Emily bumped into Kieran, and after a while recognised him from when they were ...

A/N: Hi all! This chapter has been split into two parts because otherwise it would be too long and boring. Chapter Six (P. 1) Kieran was lost. Hopelessly, horribly lost. ...

Cheers, you two! I promise it will get interesting soon! A little more so in the next chapter, perhaps... I hadn't anticipated how long it wold take to set everything ...

Hiya Spitfire! Sorry for the reviewing delay! I was around a friend's and didn't want to do it on my phone! :P The first thing that jumped out at me, ...

Chapter Five A couple of minutes later and Vara was up and about. And on a mission. She barrelled past Darius who, annoyingly, had been waiting outside for her. She ...

LOVED this chapter. And yes, the caps are entirely necessary. ;D You've got so many scenes in here that I really adore. Like the scene where they nearly kissed, sorry ...

Thanks Tanya! Shhh! My head will explode, lol. ;D That's a good point, but I was aiming at how her overreaction showed her bond with the Master. If that makes ...

Hi Kyllorac! I really enjoy your story! I think it's partly the language you use, but mostly I just love the dialogue between the prince and the fox. It's very ...

:O! I love you! Seriously, it's so kind of you to offer to review novels, as most reviewers don't do them. ^^ Well, could you please take a look at ...

Hi Skins! Could you do me a massive favour and review the first chapter of my novel? Pretty please? It's called Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons . And possibly ...

Thanks Spitfire. (: Appreciate it. Errors have now been dealt with, insert evil laugh here. Yeah, if I'm completely honest I haven't got the Awakened/Asleep thing nailed 100%. Vara knows ...

Chapter Four Vara jerked awake, and found the first thing her eyes focused on was a banner pinned on the ceiling. Welcome back!! The cheery red letters spelled, of course ...

Same as the others. This isn't really a critique, but an oh-my-gosh-that-was-really-great kind of review. The dialogue was my favourite. And your characters were very well established, especially the