EmmaJ

I am back :) I have spellchecked to the best of my and my computers ability. I am always open to story line advise and I love it when you ...

Natural :)

I have a character that smokes, but he is trying to quit hehe. I think if it adds to there personalty then why not, sometimes it might even be a ...

Oh that was lovely, reminds me of my best friend. :) well done.

The vacuum is called Henry, my tree (small, in my room, have no idea what kind it is) is called Jim , my bass is Bob and my guitar is ...

I like third and second but I always use, and read books that are in first, it makes the reader feel closer to the characters and I always find that ...

Ooo very good, post some more :) I like your style , it leaves you wanting to know more about Jack and the mysterious charter James. And Jack/you is right, ...

I am a big Meg Cabot fan and I have read alot of her stuff (apart form the princess diaries) and I saw this book in the book shop the ...

7/10 Like like very much. There is a saying from Ghandi that I love and try to live my life by. 'An eye for an eye will make the whole ...

Oh yay you posted it. Very good , I do have one comment thought , the beginning seemed to move a little fast , like a day a sentence. But ...

“Have a good time. See you at Christmas!” Luciano’s mum said as he run up the school steps. While he did so he observed loads of friends talking together. He ...

I am a big fan of Stephenie Meyer but if you are pointing out the bit I think you are, the thing with the eyes. I did not pinch that, ...

Umm. Kinda tall , dark curly hair ,brown eyes and a sunny disposition.

Running with Scissors by Augusten Burroughs. Simply amazing.

OK so here is chapter one of three (so far). I just have a few things to say before I post it, One I know my grammar and spelling suck ...