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Re: The Moth and the Flame, a Tragedy
This was actually...just...foof it was too good. To me this seemed more like a poem then a story, like a sonnet. Just so lovely, I was completely court up in ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: night man
Hey there When I first started reading this I thought it was going to be a horror of some sort. But when it turned out to be a fairytale like ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Child-34... Part one
Hey :) So the first thing I thought when I read the title was sci-fi. I think its because its similar to a the title of my sci-fi story. And ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Bed, Pure
Hi Helen :) Thanks for replying, I think its really interesting to know the story behind a poem. I had a feeling when reading your poem that you may have ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Bed, Pure
Wow that was lovely. But I came away from it quite sad. I don’t know why. But I think the second part had a general air of detachment, despite the ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 11
Haay honey bunny. You know I lurved MJ :D But one thing annoyed me. Sela, I know that your goal was to help but it sounded rather mean to me. ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
YWS is just amazing. Its given me many an hour reading, reviewing and having fun. Its helped me with my writing. And best of all I've met a life long ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Your YWS Upgrade Guide
Oooo new site looks snazzy. Hum well we'll just have to survive for a week :P Good luck with upgrading and whatnot.
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 5
Oh yay, can I just say sweety on behalf of all of your fans, we have sooo been waiting for that to happen. All in all it was grate. And ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 4
Hi ya sweety. You have already read my review so you know how much I love MJ, but I had to read it again :) Ahw I love Amanda and ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Hell hath no furey like a women undead.
Ahw thank you golle-mush o(^-^)o Really glad you like it. Yup THAT Dylan,hehe. Haha you do get used to me and my mannerisms eventually. Love ya back Em xoxo
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Hell hath no furey like a women undead.
So this is a one off short story I did once last year when I was bored, its a bit rubbishy but I have improved since this was written. It's ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 3
Oooo fabi, as always. I just have one sip-pet. It moved a little to fast, you know. I think there is room for more description, I really want to know ...
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: The Triangle Effect
Very interesting. The convo floes very well, and I like the story line so far, but it lacks some what in detail. Maybe you should describe the surroundings and how ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Open Up
I like very much. I like sky she seems funky and some one I would get along with. But I do have some nit picky things, basically like the rest ...
Mar 10, 2009
