Emma

Me and my friend read this book at it rawks! To be honest I really think his stories are getting better each time.

Black t-shirt, Black Cardy thing, Black jeans, Black girl boxer thingys, And Bra... NO I'M NOT A GOTH! OR EMO! I just can't find anything else to wear... :P

Whoa. I am grateful for what I have, but I also want to help. But... I have to wait until I am older because my mum and dad wont let ...

I like morbid... I like your avatar. Heya.

Swollen Summer - The Bravery

"I don't know..." She yawns, She can barely keep her eyes open, maybe she should just sleep on him. Then again, that probably won't be very comfy for Damien. She ...

The first paragraph made me think you were writing an essay at school, then slowly you turn it into a story. Your description is pretty good. I understand what you ...

Or it could be about a strange girl living in the jungle, which has taken a fancy to an elephant. It should be: Or it could be about a strange ...

Well, Nefer told you kind of everything you needed to know. ‘Dear Mr Taylor, I have bad news; I fear this will shock you. All forty warehouses have been burnt. ...

It’s pretty good! What is letting you down, I think, is that this story would be much greater if you had made it much larger, like a novel or something. ...

Rubbish. I don't believe in the bible and I don't believe this story. If its true then I ain't going to let ANYONE touch my skin...

Love is like chocolate. It can be sweet and yummy, or boring and tasteless.

Awww, that is what you call a cute dog. ^_^

Hehe, I have no idea what you're talking about! *walks off muttering to self*

Deep fried mars bar, from a chippie in Scotland. Gorgeous. THANK GOD! Wait, they only do them in Scotland in Britain?! They are good... ;) I get them every time ...