Emma

Shriek, I love your hair. It's so... big.:]

Sorry Crysi.

Bleeding heart, you're 23... ANYWAY MOOSIEGIRL You rush straight into the story. You seem to give us no introduction. We are hit with these characters all of a sudden. Plus, ...

Thanks. I tried changing it a bit more. I finished this at about 1 in the morning, so my work kind of deteriorated towards the end.

I'm rusty. Oh, and I changed it a bit.:] ---- She glanced down at the couple of stray tabs which lay innocently on the bedside cabinet. Her dark brown eyes ...

Aw, that's such a cute clown fish. Very nice work, you treat your fish like royalty.

Muse, you well scare me.:]

Rose, you're hot.:] Fand, I love your hair, it suits you.:]

I can't actually remember when I started. When I was little I used to have an amazing imagination. I remember writing small books when I was five or six with ...

I have hair like that but it's long at the front. It's nice, you suit it so much better than me. Me posing.:]

Well, he's posted photos that aren't him. I guess I'm a bit of an overthinker at times. When someone does something like that; you can't actually trust them again.

Did you actually do this? It's pretty good.

OMG NO WAY ITS A TREE! ;o!

I LYKZ CATS!!!111!!1one!1!!

HINT: Instead of just telling people what happens; try telling them the way they did it, how they felt, what was going through their minds. E.g. "We all run away" ...