Emma

Happy birthday! Hope you have fun.

I laugh at her bony body attempting to get off the concrete floor, her nose gushing uncontrollably with blood. She covers it up, tears spilling from her eyes. Other kids ...

6/10 I like it, but I don't see how someone could have it as an avatar. The three squares just... ruin it.

Lmao very good. I don't like the beginning when you repeat the 'or's' but that is probably just your style. Did this actually happen or did you just make it ...

Yeah, what fishr said, PM with part three. This very good, but if Gus was dying, whouldn't he be breathing the words, I don't think he would be able to ...

Well, it would be nice for you to carry on so we can get an idea of what you're trying. A writer should always finish what they start. Something I ...

Can I see the pictures you done it from? :D Becuase these are very good.

I only have my ears pierced. I can't get my belly button done, because I kinda dont have one. And no way am I getting my nose or tongue done. ...

Whoa, very nice. If you made a book I would defiantly read it. I love your work! OK, I'm done now. I had a moment.

Its gay. And yes, I'm using gay - Where we live and where other people live, gay can also mean very stupid and just wrong. Oh wait... Nah, anyway I ...

Whoa.... Now that is a different type of script.

Lmao very good. I can't say much can I? How did you get the idea for it?

It is very hard to read, I think you should break it up so then I can find it easier to read.

OK, comments! Milkybar, you are very pretty, you are so lucky. What is up with all the girls looking pretty? Hunter, yay! you're smiling! Very nice. :wink: Oooooh, SK... :P ...

You rude little girl. :P You taste like apple sauce. Oh yummy!