Emma

It was very good. I really did enjoy the whole thing. There was some few mistakes. One main one I had reread the line and I still didn't understand it. ...

I don't like the idea. I comment on stories, of course, you know I do... but I can't all the time because I just haven't got the time!

It's not as wet and windy as Scotland. x] Anyway, welcome to the site. It's fun! Lmao...

Trouble... with woman? O____O; what? TPBM likes chocolate. (If they don't... I'll eat you) *growls*

Hey. I like your name. It's fun! ^____^

Here is the finished version. OK, I just really would like some help on it! I need to keep to the 800 word limit, so it's difficult to make changes ...

Yay! Well done! She really does deserve it. ^________^

O________o; ...What? That's a cute pig! ^_^ *huggles pig*

Sponson, I know someone on MSN who speaks worse n00bish than you...

INSIDE YOUR NOSE! Eww... x]

6/10. It's a burning tree, right? O____o;

Aww, no fun. *pouts* I made some more changes to it. O____o; I hope that's a little better.

So far it is pretty good. I can tell there is a lot to this story. I enjoyed it so far. There's just some grammatical errors in this piece, but ...

Eww! Westlife songs! >x] Beautiful People - Marilyn Manson

I have hair. Heh, I rock. TPBM loves me more than Firestarter. x] [EDIT] You'd do the same. >____>;