Emma

That was very cute and funny! But I could see that you could do more to this to make this even more funny. Remember, after someone speaking; you take a ...

It's alright, but there are some problems with it. For instance, you don't use a comma! The sentences drag on; which makes it boring for the reader. Your story is ...

Don't make me drool Dono, that's not very nice... I really want pizza now... so badly. *starts crying*

Fontroy... what? Braden! I'm calling you Braden from now on! Until I forget to call you that! That name is so fun. To be honest; I have never seen you ...

Bad shading! Very bad... no, joke... it just needs to be improved somehow. The one thing that is bothering me is the arm and hand with that ball... I don't ...

Is that PIZZA?! O____O; And fun picture Dono. All your pictures are fun! W00t! x]

Heya! Welcome to the site! It's really fun here! Hehe!

It's good... nothing new... but very good. You are getting better at it.

*wishes you luck* Have fun, m'dear. ;)

Stars! O_____o; Yeah, nice name...

That is pretty good. I really can't say much because I don't really do fighting stories. (Normally because they're not done in a way I like it done). This is ...

Yay! It's fun! And it has the word 'sexy' in it... 8/10!

No! I want puppies! TPBM likes monkeys.

It is a good picture. Better than what I can do! x] I'd say the only problem is your actually outline or what ever. I think you should of used ...

Yeah! Crysi! I love your hair, it's so smooth and fun! And those boots... whoa... x] But... you all can't beat me.. so I went on a picture taking spasm ...