Emma

Jack, its the way Suzie speaks, not everyone needs to speak standard English in a story.

Nice, though thats what I dont think 67%! Oh well, each one of us has different views!

See? I've never thought of starving my self. I like food too much :P

Nice song, and they thought that you were from 1920, okay... There are a couple of typos. Like: mle - male and is that trying - tiring? And also I ...

Sorry Harley, I laugh at everything.... Please forgive me.

Hey nice story! Where are all the other nice comments?! Out of 10.... 9 1/2. I would love it to see more!

Yes, I did let Harley finish it off for me. and see? One mistake: sty should be stay. Unless its a new word.... But please tell her to write more!!! ...

Okay, okay! I didn't mean to offence you! So I was wrong, really I don't think weight is a problem (only for those BIG headed ppl) And you can all ...

Hiya, I thought you were old here... Anyway, Im not a big fan of horses. I hate it when I see horses in stables, I feel like they arent free ...

Hey thanks alot, then this must be my best piece yet! There is another one which I did first. Its called 'Rachel: Shaking' Though this one is better because I ...

Thank you, when I try to make my next poem which be like soon, someday... I will remember to take those into considaration.

No, your work is good, by the way you MUST send in your art work. Cos Im still waiting.

Hey thanx.

Wow that is like really good. Okay so I didn't understand some of the words but it matched the poem beautifuly. And also, when writing a poem, you must begin ...

Something inside me is telling me to watch those clouds, I don’t know why but I do it. I walk over to the dusty window and peer out into the ...