Emma

Erm... Hi! I like watching you type, you bang hard on all the keys, Im like: BE CAREFUL! You'll kill it! I;m gentle with mine!

Nice, did you kill your friend? Meanie! It was good, though something isn't right about it. I think the others might think that to, and if they do then they ...

This is a story I did for my geography topic. I let Harley help me, though nearly all the writting and the plot was my idea. I really hope you ...

Tis good though I have NO idea what so ever about what is going on. Apart from that they were in a fire... Where's their parents?!

It is very good though it didn't really suit me, if you know what I mean. Though I will still read the next part.

Nice! Just send it here so me can read! :D

Thankyou, I'm glad that you have gave your honest opinion and have gave me ways to sort it out. As I am not really good with stories I will use ...

Me! I hate Harry Potter, sorry for you fan out there. Don't post unless you know what my name is.

The colour green....

Okay, you lot have something I dont have... Though I dont have a very good picture of it. I will get a better one though, (if you ask) I haven't ...

Hee, thanks. And dusty, I see what you mean. I told you Im rubbish! If I do try I will try to put in my description, Im kinda new to ...

go you! have a party! Thanks! :oops: Ahem... Stories? Where are yours?!

hawk, did you win the race? P.s If you want to see something mega sick, just ask. :D I have something that would make you sick!

wow, it is really good. I like it all, and there isn't really much wrong with it. Good work

lol Its good but of course, it didn't catch my eye. If you worked one it, making it stand out more I bet it would be alot better. AND LOLLIPOP ...