Emma

^ Has three libraries which is walking distance... Lucky!

Emma looks at her, still not knowing her name, she takes a long gulp of her drink, enjoying every bit of it. A sudden burp exits her mouth she blushes, ...

I don't care really, as long as I have socks I'm alright!! xD

Emma comes back with a few bottles of beer in her hands, she comes up to Ari and the other girl and offers them one each. With a huge smile ...

Emma narrows her eyes, but then smiles a little. "It's just the beach I go to, oh and remember you go with the army, I hate that sort of stuff ...

Emma smiles at Ari, so what if her dad says never to trust a guy with a gun, maybe she could hold it. "I'm from around her, Ari. Moved here ...

"I.. Erm.. I'll be right back!" She says, Emma then runs up the hilly bit, past the party area with her dog running ahead of her. Two minutes later she ...

Emma smiles, happy that she isn't really going alone, she takes a glance at the man with the gun and up the hilly part of the beach where her house ...

Erm... Well.... A different type of story, but well written... Erm.. Nice work...

Emma stares at the man, who is with her dog Molly. She nods taking in Molly, holding onto her collar to put on her lead. "Erm.. Yeah," She answers the ...

She looks round to see where her dog went to, and sees a man with a gun on his back pet her dog, her heart stops, a man with a ...

Its like swearing, but ain't illegal!! It ain't twice as bad as swearing... Stupid...

To be honest (AND PLEASE DONT HATE ME) when reading the hobbit, it got boring it was so hard for me to picture what was going on in the story. ...

Like I said before, that is pretty good. Infact it great! Carry on as you amy, I'm going to keep on reading!

Hey they is good! One of the best I read. Great detail!! Wow... *walks off dazzled*