EmilyofREL

October, 1997 “Happy Birthday Anna Faith!” I plant a kiss in her baby fine hair, as she smears through the icing on her cupcakes. I quickly grab the candles, before ...

Emotional...wow, incredibly emotional. Beautiful written. Great job!

Everything else has been said, but I just have to say that a love it. Great rhythm and flow. Hilarious! :)

I liked this. I think the line everyone said didn't make sense "poem as lovely as a tree", could be changed to A poem "As lovely as a tree," (you ...

I have a Nook and while I love it, I have to admit I don't use it much. I travel with it, because it's easy to carry, but nothing beats ...

I didn't stop smiling the whole time. This is awesome!

I agree with the previous post. Another idea is to break it up into stanzas. It looks like a good piece, but the big blocks of text are difficult to ...

Four years. That’s how long it’s been since the first time I went into DKA. I was in seventh grade. It’d been about a week or two since I’d taken ...

I've never had what people would call a conventional strong faith. I haven't been to church in years because my parents speak "Christianese" and my mom has been critized many ...

That's true, and I should probably break this chapter up. But the thing is she didn't miss just ONE started with one and kept going. At first it was out ...

Hey you! I know i read this before, but just wanted to read it again. All the nitpicks have been taken care of, so I'll leave you alone. Oh and ...

This is hilarious!! Great lighthearted poem to read. The nitpicks have been pointed out, I just wanted to say I enjoyed it! Would you mind checking my stuff out if ...

My jaw's on the floor. I've only read one other poem from the point of view of a disease. That was one was more positive, but this one. Wow! What ...

This is so sad...But I'm confused. Did they hit each other? why was he on his way to the airport? Did I miss something? This has a lot of potential, ...

Wow! I love stories that can take me from grinning like a fool to having tears in my eyes within the span of a few paragraphs. This was pretty good. ...