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Re: Outside Looking In
Hi all! I've been away from YWS for a longgggg time and I'm anxious for the critiques again. The piece is called "Outside Looking In" :) Let me know if ...
Mar 30, 2012 -
Re: God vs.Science
okay. So I didn't have time to read the whole 8 pages of this thing, but I read the first few pages and see this story as a discussion launch ...
Mar 30, 2012 -
Re: Name Central
Hi everyone! Can someone help me come up with a good name for...hmm... a name of a religion? The religion itself is like Christianity, which stems from Judaism. At least ...
Mar 29, 2012 -
Re: Name Central
Sometimes it takes awhile to name a character too. I'm working on a novella and the main character's name is Wendy Grimm. The antagonist's name is Ethelred Antonescu. It took ...
Mar 29, 2012 -
Re: Be Your Character!
Shawn Matthew Mackenzie He is 17 years old. Shaggy dark brown hair that always sticks up a bit and chocolate eyes. He has a medium, uneven complexion and a wide, ...
Mar 29, 2012 -
Re: Broken Jar
I love this. I read the more expanded part of this that you sent me a while back, but this is just as great. I don't remember excatly how you ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Broken Jar
Okay, so I've already read this. And I read it again...and I cried, again. This is awesome dude. Keep it up!
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Saving a Child (Plot)
Write it. now. Please. I'll be reading. and yes!! Christian Writer's rock (which reminds me...I need to change my avi!) :D
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Lifeless Friends
HI! I'm not gonna review this cause I did that already. Just wanted to let you know again how awesome this is and how awesome you are! Miss you, and ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: deleting from forums
Hilarious...and making me wish more and more I had a boyfriend I could do this with. My favorite part was this line here "Boyfriend Gatorade Fights are a milestone of ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Do your characters talk to you?
My characters talk to me a lot...not too me, but they never shut up talking to each other or trying to tell me about their lives. My favorite quote "writer's ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Create a Tumblr for your Main Character
I thought about making a facebook. But now I'm totally making her a tumblr. :)
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: And so I write.
This is BEAUTIFUL! Seriously...I'm sorry for what you went through (hugs) But the positive thing is pain can release as incredible writings like this one.
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Water Under The Bridge Chapter Ten: Ryan
Ryan—October 17 It’s 7:21 according to every freaking clock in the house…the bus comes at 7:18. I really hope it’s running slow. “What are you and your friends doing for ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: An Evening with a Vegan
I agree with everyone else, this is beautiful. The power of food is not ordinary and you showed that wonderfully. The imagery is so vivid and beautiful. And the careful ...
Jul 14, 2011
