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Taya didn’t sleep that night; her mind kept flashing to Jake. She felt nothing for this new stranger who had taken the form of her one true love. Even in ...

Taya got home to find her mother already asleep. The quaint little country house sat on top of a hill out in the country. Hilly pastures stretched out across the ...

Chapter 1: Part 1 Mrs. Lowndes preached on about the Great Depression and the effects it had on the rest of the world. Taya had a hard time paying attention. ...

It's beyond me... :elephant:

She lay on her bed, dead inside. It was too much. She rolled over and picked up the knife. Her mother died in the car crash to save her, her ...

Prologue She sat on the dock, alone. 'Alone' was the very word she had hoped wouldn't come up. Her long golden hair and sapphire-blue eyes reflected the moonlight as the ...

I agree with JCobsesed, there were alot of of stops, and a few typos, but I still loved it. Keep writing! :elephant:

I really liked it and hope to read more. It really caught me and drew me in and I saw no real problems. Can't wait for the next piece. :elephant:

I think the italics just don't work on YWS, but I really like it. It really drew me in and I can't wait for the continuation. One thing bugged me, ...

Once upon a moonlit night, I sit and stare at the world beyond And dream of magic and dragon's flight And live where beauty is ever donned. When I dream, ...