EmiSukotto16

Part 1 I was the happiest person in the car. My first camping trip to the mountains! I was so excited. I was already wishing I had invited my friend ...

"The two 'people,'" I used my fingers to make quotation marks, "at the bar are Riley and Anna." I pointed at each one. "Anna might've danced if she had felt ...

I became intoxicated with the mix of lights, music, and movement. I felt no fatigue no matter how long I danced. The DJ kept a constant flow of pumping Rave ...

"Like it?" I mused. "It's more like 'love it.'" The air was thick with the thumping bass as more human's fell under the spell of the girls. "You're one of ...

"Anna? Are you feeling any better?" I asked over the sound of the music. Anna nodded and sipped her strawberry daiquiri. "Alright, then." I said and headed to the dance ...

I had left the group behind with the other vamp chick and Anna had followed me. I noticed that Anna wasn't getting any less nervous around the wolves. Riley had ...

MUSIC=LIFE Converse

"Let's go then!" I made sure to keep my voice down. Cassy started climbing the wall and I followed close behind. Just over the wall a small ledge led around ...

Sharra I came to the big, rough, stone wall that surrounded the baron's house. This would be an interesting feat. I could hear a faint clinking as dogs on the ...

Okie dokie. It's good read, and it really flows (for me). I just have to comment spelling and grammar (Yay! :elephant:) You are DEFINATELY not who I thought you was. ...

9/10 ~ I'd think Avril was queer if she said that to me...

I really liked it. And the way you changed your writing style after the first paragraph was interesting. I was drawn in from the "Tap...tap...tap.." Very good! (~) Emi (~)

Tamora I knew what Lord Arakin was thinking, but I said nothing. I watched as the Novices attempted to change Melody's ideas of us Magicians. She seemed reluctant to listen, ...

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((I think I'll come in a little bit later. Do we need a DT?))