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Slade had jumped into the dogfight, attempting to break it up. I decided to help and, using my Vampire gift of kinesis, I used my mind to grab hold of ...

hm. If it is, we'll have to say that.

Hey, who said "Keep your hands off of her," Frenchy?

Just want to know if this is a good start to a chapter. It's a vampire novel... =============================================================== I watched as he walked in, his black hair a curtain acro

Blue eyes, I remember when I first meet you. I think that should be 'met'. I wonder when we’ll meet [color=gree]again. Blue eyes, I wish I could see you again ...

I'll make sure we don't lose ya, Stalker...:D

Should I take choral next year?

8/10 It's little Gaara? what more is there to say???

6/10 might give Confucius something to think about...:D

Really good. It is very well written. greenjay: "He stood tiredly" would be better. I agree with greenjay I found this piece very interesting and can't wait to read more! ...

((Where'd everyone go?))

((What's going to happen next?))

I watched as the vampire strode to the bar. He glanced at me, he was smug about trespassing on the werewolves' land and he had a perverted look in his ...

I'm writing a couple novels, an essay about moments I've felt 'intense emotions,' and basically what Dream is scared of getting caught doing...

Cree I walked into the mess tent without an appetite. Even after the battle, I wasn't hungry. Head wouldn't approve of missing meals when everyone would need their strength, but ...