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Re: A Simple Black Dress
Love your poem. I just reviewed it like three times but my computer kept deleting my text... so here is generally what i said earlier- Cool poem, like the clothing ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
8 of 10 cool, i guess, and so true!
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: The Hospital Story
Hey! I'm Kelly and, uh, I'll just get to the thing now... Well, cool story. Are you planning to write another? If not then you've a few to many loose ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: All Babies Are Blessings (16)
Wow! You really know how to write a story that's good and makes me want to go back from 16 to 1, which i can never seem to do. :( ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Windchill
On days like this, it’s hard to go into my house. I can finally understand what they mean by walking down memory lane- although my feet are bigger and the ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Loss, part III
Her hair is cropped short, dyed blonde with brown streaks. I solemnly hand the cashier a twenty dollar bill. She smiles, giving me my change, then saying good-bye, the grin ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Untitled Gay Romance
REally a very cool story, like Rena said- i didn't want it to end. You have vey little details on appearances, so Justin and Connor could be any two random ...
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: Maybe a kiss could save lives?
Such a good story! I have to go... I'll give a full-er critique later...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Titleless
chatting five minutes bliss smiling trying not to laugh trying not to cry will i see you again? ever? that time seems so far away... do I love you? or ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Alcohol
little query: who's Elizabeth, and who's Adia? I'm sure that everybody but me gets it, but... I'm very confused.
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: My Hiro
OhmiGod... that story was beyond amazing. Seriously. How do you not have a single reply yet??? Well, that means that i get to be first!!!!! So, i don't really like ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Getting Out
Hey! So... I loved your story! You kept the girl real and that made it really believable, i guess. I wanted to live. I wanted to live get rid of ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Carbonation and Katies
Love the story I wished I knew where she went, and who it was she had left in her place. that sentence confused me. Who's she? Who left who in ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Forever with you
super good... i just love your story. Only thing is, i don't see much action coming from this... i'd love to see where you go with it. PM me when ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]
Hey i was wondering if you could review my story "Loss, part I" because it's still very rough. It is under the Romantic fiction section and is rather new, so ...
Sep 10, 2009
