EmiAnne

This is a very... intriguing. I like it, on a whole. Very interesting beginning. Preface/prologue thingy. You might want to call it a preface/prologue, since it's so short. :arrow: You ...

I liked the series. The ending was... odd, but you couldn't expect anything else after everything that Lemony Snicket had written. I think that the only really big bad part ...

Thanks for all these responses! I can't believe I got so many of them at one time... and so fast! Thanks for my nitpicks and general plot suggestions, it really ...

It's so odd. But cool, too. 9.5/10!

I like to write about romantic fiction/ fantasy fiction, but I don't have any fantasy up on the site for now. Not to sound dumb or anything, but what does ...

Hi Ballerina! What's up? Swing era is rather cool. I had to dance swing with this dude at this camp this one time, but he was super horrible. But he ...

“Stay,” she whispers, but he pretends not to hear. “Please stay?” She pulls her thin and stringy brown hair out of her eyes, her bright blue eyes trying to see ...

Ballad of Serenity is the absolute best song ever. Did you ever see the tv show? was the best thing ever.... Anyways, the link you have is broken, but I ...

Hmmm... -sweet family computer (no =[ laptop) -random sugary things (30 coke zeros? hah! I'd go through that in like a week)(halloween candy is good) -odd Japanese anime on hulu. ...

Also, if you're at a total loss of how to critique/ how to respond to people critiqueing you, go to the itunes store and search young writers society, because there's ...

Hola dude. So cool that you're joining... it's cool having new people. I'm really not all that not new, so yeah.... I love fiction! and poetry pretty much runs along ...

That was a pretty sweet story. You're gonna have a part two, right? Well, accually, this could stand alone, if you wanted it too... I agree with Empress, you need ...

Hey, I'm Kelly, and I'll be your critiquer. Critiquist? Whatever... Okay, so it's part two and I missed chapter one, so I'm guessing I'm missing alot. But in general, it's ...

Awwww, its cute! A little odd, but still cute. 8 out of ten, I'd say.

8.3/10 It's... Interesting. Like, I'll love you better when you're dead, or I'll love you better when I'm dead? Dunno. Interesting, though.