EmiAnne

Hello!! :D "Darkness envelopes me, it pulls me under its wicked cape." Epicly awesome. just saying. :arrow: "A sweet feeling of floating then I awake, my mind is blurred, and ...

Hi! i'm Kelly and i'm gonna be reviewing your story today!! ( I also am spectacular at stating the obvious, by the way) :D great story. i like the beginning, ...

Hmm... this is a pretty short series. I have 2 titles that i'm debating between... by next chapter i'll definitely have a title nailed down. -Kelly =] ----------------- “Kate?” His ...

awwwwww, it's so cute!!!!!! i like the girl and the dress, its pretty adorable. i

Hello! I'm Kelly and I'll review today... kk, so generally i liked the story. The title is very nice and it grabs the attention of the reader. I like how ...

I like this part a lot too. YOu know what I just realized? I have a story by the exact same name, and your profile pic (cat from red dwarf) ...

Okay, so that was a really good story. Rally good descriptions! :arrow: in the beginging, it says Sibo is his "newly found love" what does that mean? :D I like ...

I rally liked this piece. I barely noticed the rhyme and when i read it the second time i figured out he rhyme and was like, whoa, thats cool. so, ...

i think i need to disagree with Mr Knightly. I like your "It was night." It is a very blunt way to start a story, and does not sound decent ...

Hey!! Sorry, I haven't been n YWS since November, so... trying to catch up on the stories that i used to follow. I like the twist. But when she says ...

I think that totally and absolutely, the firefly- class ships in Firefly own. Esspecially the insides- if you are in the deep, dark space, who would work so hard to ...

I kind of agree... it isn't a poem. Well, yet at least. Maybe... try spacing it differently? If I spaced one of my poems the way most are, I would ...

Hi! I'm Kellym and, uh, I'lkl critique your story today! Ok, so I loooovvvvveeeedddd your beging fantasy- In the distance I can see myself, shoulder length black hair shining in ...

I think that it is interesting, but the first sentence of a story isn't what draws me in, but the first paragraph draws me in. I like the name Raven, ...

Hey! Cool, I lovveee flashbacks. They make me happy. Weird, huh? So, I like this chapter. I hope my reviews are acually helpful. Also: on my first day here (on ...