EmiAnne

She laughed, tossing her hair a bit. Dayton saw the colour of her eyes for the first time- they were purple, like a flower or the perfect cake icing. And ...

I was stuck in this itty bitty room with Tarah, my roommate. The very small sickbay room kept either of us from moving so we had gotten closer than I ...

Okay, so.... :D What descriptions you had were very good. however, :arrow: You have very few descriptions. You said, "soft, dark Hispanic skin" and that is a good, short & ...

Um, this is... interesting. :?: Well, the premise is confusing, and it took me a few reads to get it. Maybe make it a little more clear? :D I really ...

The night was so perfect- my toes were tingling in such happiness. Never had someone been so nice to me, never had someone been so sweet. He cut off the ...

...interesting... :arrow: "I almost always forgot to turn out the lights. Tonight was no exception." If tonight is no exception, then wouldn't she have not turned out the lights tonight ...

Well... :D Generally, history reports are incredibly boring, including mine. Yours kept me engaged and made me want to read the next paragraph. :?: The first little line "Evil knows..." ...

Hmmm... :arrow: The first paragraph is a little bit confusing. :?: So, when the old lady limps in, how can he tell that ther hair had been "brought to a ...

This sounds sort of historical-fictiony, but not in a bad way. Maybe it's just the part about the Victorians houses, but suddenly I thought about things like Pride & Prejudice, ...

I think that this is interesting. I like the part about how her hair is "the colour of Autumn," i think that that is really nice. the moment you said ...

I think that this is a cute little picture, with a little hand (from a rainbow vortex) reaching up for another, bigger and stronger hand. It looks sort of like ...

i like this piece! :arrow: the first sentence seems sort of in-the-action and very unusual. I like starting in the middle of the action, but you need to also sort ...

hmm.. this seems sort of like Other Fiction instead. I think that it's nice! Well when you talk about the scientist, I think it would sound more... epic... to say ...

Aww, this is a really nice poem. I like your simplistic rhyming and good subject matter. The thing that I like is that even though the main majority of people ...

This photo is rather adorable, I must say, and I so very love the sepia tone you've chosen. To me, sepia just screams, you know, classic/romantic/touching. The title implies the ...