EmiAnne

Hiya I like your story premise, and I like all your settings. Your characters are okay, but I don,t get why Luke is the angel, though I do get why ...

Hiya! Starting off, I super duper like your story (I'm totally giving it a star or liking it or whatever it is) but there are a few things- Her tanned ...

Hey, so This is part 3 of a story. It kind of doesn't make sense unless you've read parts 1 & 2. Sorry. ------ “Sprite,” comments the boy, his eyebrows ...

Yay! Thanks for the reviews from everyone so far, and I've edited it to make it less creepy and everything. I'm posting my next one soon, though, so be on ...

Hi! would you please review a story of mine? I'm trying to make it totally awesome, but I'm having troubles! Please???

Hi! I'm Kelly and I'll be your reviewer today!!!! :D I like her general attitude towards the world, but she doesn't seem nineteen. She sounds maybe 15, tops. :arrow: The ...

Hey everyone! Both parts of this have been revised & edited to make them so much better... but still tear the new versions to shreds, please. It helped a whole ...

I awoke slowly that morning. I was facing the wall and for a moment, I thought I was still in my usual room with Tarah, still with a close friend. ...

Hi! I'mdesperate for reviews! I posted my story two months ago and all I have is two reviews! Well, my story is at . It's under romantic fiction, but this ...

Yay! thank you everyone for your reviews!

Hey! I totally loved your story. Like everyone said, awesome twist! :?: would a guy and a girl really get placed in a cabin together? :arrow: You should make the ...

I like your story a whole bunch! :D I like how you progress up to her being dead, from her worrying all the way up to her yelling at the ...

Awww, that was a nice, sweet and cute story! I didn't see any typos I think, and... well, you write really good. Wow, you have a whole bunch or reviews ...

Hey, hello! So first off, the very beginning before the story, when you said "its about a..." that's not good. Now we know exactly everything pretty much that happens in ...

Hmmm... this is quite nice. I like your descriptions, (which I guess is the entire point of your story) as they are good. Go back and read it out loud ...