Embee

Hey Skins, I thought you did a pretty good job on this. I like how he's trying to be all positive in the beginning but in the end, he eventually ...

Hello! I think that this has a lot of potential to be a haunting and deep piece, but right now, you need to work on your character development and descriptions. ...

I love the flower; very realistic. The only thing I could find wrong with the eye is that the eyelashes look too separated/far apart from each other. The flower would ...

Hey I thought this was a very powerful piece. I love your descriptions and the quote is inspiring as well. You have a very good vocabulary ( primordial, clandestine ), ...

Hello! You have a good story going here, but I really think that you're doing too much telling and not enough showing. Add in some dialogue, action, emotion, descriptions, suspense, ...

Not editing is cool, but if you aren't going to edit, you need to watch the lighting (as yurriko said) and your subjects. You did do a good job, though. ...

Here as requested! :) Picture #1: I love the colors in this picture, but there are lots of different things happening in this picture. First, there's the sun (lovely, by ...

Hey! I appreciate your comments on my photography, so I'm here to return the favor. I think you have a good idea here, but you can do so much better ...

Hello! I thought this was a nice little piece but I think you could expand a lot more on it. Long-lost relatives have crawled out of the woodwork to bombard ...

These pictures are more recent. Embee.

Helloooo! Thanks for your review on my pictures, by the way. One thing I've noticed about this novel is that you switch points of view every chapter and put the ...

Hey welcome to YWS! I really liked how you made the colors of the flag pop. The picture looks a little blurry to me, so maybe you could sharpen it. ...

Hello, these were well written, but I think you could have expanded more on some parts, like the whole King and Queen thing. Are they part of a pack? No, ...

Hey, I thought your descriptions were very vivid, but the plot itself fell kind of flat. There isn't anything extremely eye catching about it. It's just another "person can't sleep" ...

Hey, I like this beginning a lot more than the one you had before. It's an interesting chapter and it's a good start to your story. It has more of ...