Embee

Hello! So I really liked all of these, especially the one of the storm. The only suggestion I have for that one is to maybe crop out the right part ...

Thank you guys for your comments. Maybe: Yes, the first one was edited. I love Photoshop. :) Sometimes I get carried away with it, but I'm glad you liked the ...

Author's note: I haven't written in a very long time.... so go ahead and rip this apart! I have pretty thick skin, so don't be afraid of "hurting my feelings". ...

If you look closely, there's a footprint on that rock. Oh dang. There is! :smt003 (though, again, my photography I like to keep as "pure" as possible) I know what ...

Hello! I really liked all of these, but my favorites were the pictures of the clouds in the sky. Picture 1: I love how dramatic the lighting is in this ...

I completely agree with you about the ending. The movie started off on a real good note, but as I got farther into it, I started getting seriously disappointed. Sure, ...

Pictures I took in my grandparents backyard. The flower one was way too bright, so I toned down the colors...maybe a little too much. Tell me what you think! Embee

Hey, it has been a while! Alright, so I couldn't find any glaring errors with this chapter, but the only thing that I would suggest fixing is breaking up the ...

Hello, haven't been on here in a while, but I'd be glad to give you a review! But before I start your story, I'll give you my opinion on the ...

Hello! Back again; sorry if I'm a little late. I like the revisions you made, but maybe you could break the history into smaller sections? Like have her read a ...

Dang it! I got here too late again! Hmmm, like everyone else, I like how you ended the chapter with a cliff hanger. I like how you give us insight ...

I spent most of today reviewing this. It was a pleasure to read and I was thoroughly impressed. I've made comments on your document and added my thoughts at the ...

I agree with what everyone says. I have problems starting things too. I usually type everything out on a computer, but when I start having issues, I just shut down ...

Woah, this is really long. First, you should break down your posts into smaller parts. That way, more people will want to read and review. Also, you might want to ...

Hey, I'm not sure how to go about critiquing scripts, but I'll try my best. I honestly couldn't find anything horribly wrong with this. It sounds like the type of ...