EloquentDragon

Banned for using smilies.

Banned for not realizing that was on purpose.

Title self explanatory, this is written from the perspective of a politician during the American Civil War. A Boatload of Sorrow Most people wouldn’t think to bother about asking me. ...

Banned for not having a valid purpose for banning.

All right, first off, I like the humor you added to the story, it adds a lot. Secondly, I'll deal with the grammar issues first: "Now run home and cry ...

Well hello, I really liked the way you begin this story, with the story about the man, dream catcher, and shop keeper. I would love to see a lot more ...

the only thing I found just a little blah was the whole dialoge, "Hey, I guess she's asleep, we'll leave the letter with her." I concur, not to seem abrasive, ...

Banned for not having a photo that relates to your name.

I loved your story, and although I cannot give as in depth critique as I would like, I will try my best to give you some pointers on grammar. I ...

This is what I think about Sushi; so in someways I have no idea why I'm putting it in this forum. Perhaps someone can find a deeper, hidden meaning to ...

Gracias, I will head over to the "Meet the Authors" area and do that.

Banned for considering those last few comments "funny." On a random note, I loathe an unequal equilibrium.

Well Nike, this is a good start to your story, and opening with something that makes the readers ask a lot of questions and read more to find answers to ...

Yes, I know, its against the rules to post your story like that in the text, but I hate exhuastive manuels, though the instructions given on this site are hardly ...

They said I was a mistake, a failure. A glitch in the company’s long running perfection. They ignored me; they treated me like sand. An “inanimate” object, said they. A ...