EloquentDragon

So, this is a good story, I only noticed a few things about the storytelling itself, so I'll be brief. First of all, your style is very brief and to ...

In response to your question on the authenticity of the characters names: Raul (which is actually spelled RAOUL) is a traditional French or Spanish name. Litzs is a northern European ...

A word of advice: If you want people to review your work, review other people's work. This is the idea that YWS is grounded on. When you review someone elses ...

Okay, so that may seem like a lot, but it isn't really. :) I've seen much, much, much worse. And that is being generous. As it is, I have a ...

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Banned for not using an extended vocabulary.

This is the second posting of this piece of writing. (ugh) Where is you people's sense of feedback? Sir Dacron pressed his horse on through the rain. Thunder rolled ominously ...

Banned for using an invalid rebuttal.

My name resulted from arrogance... On topic: I was signing up for an artist's online networking site and had to think of a name. I like to write, and I ...

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So, first off I loved your story. Its short, but it is able to show the subplots and back-story of a real person's life out on the prairie. I noticed ...

Sir Dacron pressed his horse on through the rain. Thunder rolled ominously above them. It was not often that Dacron felt fear, but now it had wrapped its iron hand ...

Suddenly, the door banged open; letting in a blast of cold air. "Looks like there's a storm coming." The tall man who stepped in through the door remarked. He drifted ...

Banned for not banning me for banning you four times in a row.

Banned for not having three stars.