EloquentDragon

Banned for being random. (BTW, are YOU a Japanese-speaking Frenchman from Maine?)

Banned for being a culturalist.

Prodigal Dreamer (This isn't good, I found another time waster thread. Thanks a lot, Jenth...)

Banned for wanting me to help you with your Dragon. I AM a dragon and it's insulting.

This is part 3. To view Part 1/2, click here: But there was nowhere to run. Tash reached the other side of the room and found himself faced with another ...

This is part two. To view part 1, click here: I need help on pacing the action, please help me on this. “What is it Tash?” Urich asked, standing up. ...

This was based off of a dream I had. I want it to be really good, so please feel free to tear this apart. Be harsh if you want, I ...

What in the world is a moon bear rider? Banned because I can't read Italian. And because Italian food is bad for your health. (Y asi sabes, espanol esta la ...

Banned for changing your avatar.

I AM NOT LICENTIOUS!!! (Besides, that term is hardly applicable in this case...) Banned for being newer than I, and yet having more reviews. Grr... What monkey are we discussing ...

That is, quite possibly, the most random comment I have seen on here yet. Banned for talking like a gansta. Banned for suggesting that I have a toothless monkey in ...

YEESSS!!! Finally, somone to ban besides Char.SWM! So... I hereby ban thee for blatantly displaying free lampshades in the fridge.

So, what draft is this? It's fairly good for a first draft, but then for two or more... There are a few grammar points, and then some of your prose ...

Banned because you turned 99. (This is a YOUNG writer's site, in case you havn't noticed...)

Banned for unsmiling.