EloquentDragon

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Yah... It's a thriller. An Action/Adventure Thriller (With elements of mystery at the begining, but that doesn't count. ;)

So... I need a bit of help. As in HELP!!! You see, I've got, what I think, is a great idea, but I'm afraid that it might be really cliché ...

LadyPurple, Rosey had a really good suggestion. I would also add that, before you start writing, and only if it's terribly complicated and the story calls for it, to draw ...

Fore note: This is one of the more disturbing journal entries written by one of our patients here. I was there when he wrote it. I have withheld his name ...

It's not really fair, you sort of leave us hanging. Where's the rest of the story? *so frustrating* Anyway, I really liked this, but there are a few grammar points. ...

Thanks a ton Apple.

What's the story's premise? (And Rosey, what about those daisho "moon slashing swords"--the ones with the cresent blades near the hilt?)

A little weird...enjoy! (This is for a contest) Snow It falls like ash, And death enters into the world The first flakes touch the surface, Brushing against hardened ground Awake ...

True Italian

What's the premise?

...BTW, "Mason" isn't really an oriental name.... (But then, I don't know the story, so I'm just assuming, judging by the word "Katana")

See what I mean? Over here we don't use, as a general rule; "aunty" "totes" "def" or "waddle up north." (LOL) Anyway, thanks for the help. Do you think it ...

You could do one of those cheesy, Japanese movie pull outs: "What? How did you break my sword? It is not possible!" "Its simple, my sword was forged in the ...

So, I'm writing a story and I need to get some good, everyday lingo from Australia. Anyone from Australia on here? Anyway, I'm from America, and I've done some research ...