EloquentDragon

The King-Castle/Palace Library The warm, dark embrace of sleep slowly faded to gray, and Aldric was forced to swim to the surface of the world of the living. He lifted ...

(Whoops only posted half the review) One of your problems with having the story move too fast is that you're trying to dump info on the reader now, in this ...

Hmm, que bueno. I've always had a problem with making realistic hair, this looks very nice. Also, if you want a more "cartoony" look--with the pen outline outside of the ...

Hmm, very interesting. I didn't read your first chapter but I could still easily understand what was happening. You have a nice clarity to your story. That being said, This ...

Obviously, he’s the villain. But I tried to make him more sympathetic and believable. I also took some liberties with his past, so he’s not so “clichéd” as the “Dark ...

Name: Skagawyn-nuuk Hael (goes by Hael) Age: 40-50-ish Gender: Male From: Island country of NorFafnir, land of ice and snow Appearance: Sorry, don't have a picture. Slightly short, with a ...

CLAIMED: King and a General/ambassador from somewhere else. (Thanks SisterItaly!!!)

(Well, I get MOST anime, but still, I got yah ;) ) The thing with "Spirited Away" is that none of the events coincided with eachother, they didn't have a ...

Did "Spirited Away" make sense to anyone on here? Sure left me clueless :shock: Of course that's probably because I'm not well aquinted with traditional Japanese myths... Yeah... What did ...

AAAAHHHH! What have you done to the Scarlet Pimpernel! AAAAAAHHHH! (Which means: that's really cheesy. Now if were a S.P.-ESQUE SBRPG, that might be okay...) Although I must say, I ...

How about: "Then Remembrance Fades" as a title?

I need a little help with the grammar. And maybe a title. heh. Who will remember us? All we have done is forgotten, And none know us We have fought, ...

Why were her feet cold in the middle of summer? Banned for having an awesome avatar.

............... Banned because it is no longer 11:40pm

Banned because you don't have a picure! (Oooh, shame...)