EloquentDragon

Yes! Something up my alley! 1. If he's in a fist fight and his abdomen is bruised, they're most assuredly going to take him in to see if there's any ...

So I'll be lazy today and simply annotate. Enjoy (heh heh) the review. RED-Grammar problems. It would be nice if these are fixed. BLUE-Personal opinions. You can completely ignore these ...

Looks great, except the "C" sticks out in an odd way as it doesn't match the rest of the text and...are you sure that's an original/and/or/uncopyrighted piece of artwork? Cause ...

Hey people, thanks for all the feedback! I think I’ll go with the ability to manipulate darkness, (metaphysical/spiritual/mental darkness) which carries over in his ability to enter other people’s

So I need some help. I am writing a fantasy (a traditional-esque fantasy, you know, medieval style) that involves a strange (maybe) and dark power. I have no clue what ...

First off: Barking brilliant title, by jove! (No, I'm not British) It's sort of modern, and yet its still a fantasy title. It could use a little work, but for ...

why is this dead then?

*Frantically searches through inbox and with a dreadful realization, discovers to be left out of the loop...* So what did the PM say?

What? Why do you say it's dead? Was I the one who killed it? Please don't say it's dead! It can't be dead! Ahhhhh!!! Don't die, don't die!

The King--Library PLUS.... RE-CAP!!!! The king folded his fingers together and rested his chin on them. He replayed the scene in his mind: The girl, by now he knew her ...

terribly sorry for the long post. The King--Storming Through His Castle With one swift glance the king confirmed, absolutely, that she was gone. He cursed inwardly and stalked back down ...

Um, just asking. Is the wolf's name supposed to be Sasari or Sasuri?

Sorry, this has been a little late in coming, but now that I've set it up, the king is finally ready to start interacting with all your characters. Mwah ha ...

I agree, the animation was wonderful. It is some of the best I've ever seen that wasn't Disney. As I've said before, the set designs were wonderful, and some of ...

The King--Underneath the Castle/Palace Aldric couldn’t think clearly. There were voices inside his head, moaning and screaming. The floor was tilting wildly, spinning in a direction that he couldnâ€