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EloquentDragon

EloquentDragon

  • Research Re: help my plot- 4 acts and other trouble

    So, I'm writing an American manga series. How does one write a tv/comic book series? It's quite a puzzler for me. I ended up stretching classic, three point structure (beginning, ...

    Mar 27, 2012
  • Research Re: Alot of he's

    Not sure if you still need help but.... Watch the sentence structure. You can do a lot with varrying "he saids" with "John saids" and still maintain unconfusion/order. Mostly, it ...

    Mar 27, 2012
  • Research Re: What? Prologue?

    *ahem It doesn't HAVE to introduce the conflict, setting, world, magic, etc, In fact it's probably better if it DIDN'T introduce the so forth and above. A prologue should be ...

    Mar 27, 2012
  • Art & Photography Re: Help with the cover of my book?

    not to mention those people are probably copyrighted... Actually, I like the look, but for a graphic novel, not a book.

    Mar 27, 2012
  • Research Re: Time for action...

    Oh yeah, if it's the plot's action, then you might want to hold off on that. Starting off with action is great...but you need to introduce us to your protagonist's ...

    Mar 25, 2012
  • Research Re: Time for action...

    Um, my question should be, when should you NOT start off the first chapter w/ action? Anything...talking, sitting, eating, that could be considered action, so it would be aplicable to ...

    Mar 25, 2012
  • Research Re: Er...help? (Name related)

    Oh yeah guys, thanks for your replies! I forgot to ask: What feelings do you have toward the names "Riem" and "Shaft" conversly? What do those names connote?

    Mar 17, 2012
  • Research Re: Er...help? (Name related)

    Well... I only have two other names for the series right now: Hinata: Romantic interest Jaq: An insane, minor antagonist "Ace" is b/c he's a weapons contracter...and the assassin organization ...

    Mar 17, 2012
  • Research Re: Er...help? (Name related)

    So, I've got a guy with three names. Ace: his assasin alias thing as a member of an assassin organization. ;) Riem: His real name. I know how I pronounce ...

    Mar 17, 2012
  • Writers Corner Re: Planning out a Story

    I am a plotter--but only b/c ideas usually come to me so fast I HAVE to write them down that instant...and that isn't possible to do b/c I write relatively ...

    Mar 17, 2012
  • Archive Re: SuperPower Highschool (started)

    It was going to be...*winces* Mia's love interest I thought? I'm probably mistaken, of course... Edge quickly averted the possibly physically detremental situation by sliding into a seat further down ...

    Mar 14, 2012
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: I don't understand christianity

    Oh yeah... Frankly? If someone told me that they don't know anything about Christianity and therefore will not accept it, I simply say: "I'm not willing to give up what ...

    Mar 14, 2012
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: I don't understand christianity

    To tell you the truth, I don't understand a lot about Christianity either. :wink: There are so many different views, false doctrines, cults, etc., that to call the dictionary definition ...

    Mar 14, 2012
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Christians

    I just find it interesting that you "worship"----(*ahem, *ahem) satan and yet he is a figure from the Christian religion... But as a reply to the book worm, uh...well Christians ...

    Mar 13, 2012
  • Archive Re: SuperPower Highschool (started)

    Want me to edit that above post and change it to lunch? (Figured since everyone was at their dorms it would be logical for the next day to follow, but ...

    Mar 13, 2012


One believes things because one has been conditioned to believe them.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World